Day 10

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Day 10

Acrylic on paper

I’m happy with the background and the bird, but the branches suck. I’m open to suggestions for improving them.

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Nice work! The branches look pretty good, I guess my suggestion would be to try and use a smaller brush/thinner strokes for the highlights? Also the nodes on the sides maybe shouldn’t be perpendicular. But overall it looks great!


I am no painter so I can’t help. I’m just here to say that that bird is awesome. Super satisfying to look at.

I didn’t notice the branches till I read your description because I was too focused on the bird.


Honestly, having the branches “suck” or be unmemorable a bit seems fine, they aren’t the main subject.


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